回应于 "Level IF-116-“若我们重聚这夕阳下”" http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116 讨论串中的帖文 "Level IF-116-“若我们重聚这夕阳下”" Wed, 28 Jan 2026 22:26:36 +0000 http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7071218 Re: 赛后uv&捉虫 http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7071218 Wed, 16 Jul 2025 05:03:43 +0000 Mercury_zahwi 9099707 感谢(我知道超链接的错误 但是忘改了)🌚

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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7070299 赛后uv&捉虫 http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7070299 Tue, 15 Jul 2025 12:02:58 +0000 zcbm 9168168 文章挺好,值得uv,但你超链接怎么还是有用错的……已经帮忙改了

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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7067830 Re: 暂且NV http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7067830 Sun, 13 Jul 2025 13:57:28 +0000 Mercury_zahwi 9099707 哪里是高潮啊()我自己都不知道,这可能就是导致观感问题。重写的话。。。我没有打算,因为我很懒,其次是我怕更差了()但是我会进行改动的,至于后面排版问题,我也不知道怎么改啊꒦ິ^꒦ິ

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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7067310 Re: 暂且NV http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7067310 Sun, 13 Jul 2025 06:09:56 +0000 XiaoZI666 9485306 再提一嘴,出口后面的附录部分排版实在难受😣

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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7067308 暂且NV http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7067308 Sun, 13 Jul 2025 06:08:39 +0000 XiaoZI666 9485306 给我的感觉就是你写到高潮后突然中止,没有使人意犹未尽。总之先这样,竞赛结束后建议好好重写一下。
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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7066423 Re: 作者帖 http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7066423 Sat, 12 Jul 2025 12:49:42 +0000 Mercury_zahwi 9099707 如果指我们正热烈地活着的话是最后一段

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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7066382 Re: 作者帖 http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7066382 Sat, 12 Jul 2025 12:13:00 +0000 9304232 浅浅地问一下这是第几阶段?

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http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081#post-7066241 作者帖 http://if-backrooms.wikidot.com/forum/t-17165081/level-if-116#post-7066241 Sat, 12 Jul 2025 10:11:29 +0000 Mercury_zahwi 9099707 我可能对我们正热烈地活着这个设定理解错误,指出后我会删除。这文只是凑热闹,其实不指望拿IF-1,主要云海和公寓确实很好。


提示一下,手机端看观感不好,排版没电脑好。

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